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Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple hosts the flash fiction challenge called
Friday Fictioneers!
Take the challenge to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words using the weekly picture prompt.
Standing on deck the moonlight casts shimmering lights across the water, as the yacht sways in time to waves.
We’ve finally met.
Feeling his arms encircling me, I feel his body warmth emanating from his chest, wrapping around me, cocooned in a new safe place. I feel his lips on my neck as he leaves kisses on my skin.
Turning to face him, I tilt my head closing my eyes to photograph this moment into my scrapbook of memories. The first. The most special.
“One day at a time.” smiling I wrap my arms and hold on to new possibilities.
Genre – Romance (100 words)
Nice romantic piece, Madison.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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So lovely!
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Thank you Louise! 😃
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“I tilt my head closing my eyes to photograph this moment into my scrapbook of memories. The first. The most special.”
To me, this sounds quite calculating, almost predatory, as though there have been many men before, and she expects many after. Are we meant to take it like that?
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It wasn’t intended to be, but I can see how a different take on it could make a good psychological thriller!
Thank you for your feedback Penny.
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A nice piece of romance. Rare to get a happy ending with these stories – a welcome change!
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Thank you for your comments Iain!
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I so agree, Iain. So many times I think, “Go on the light side then boom….” my muse takes over.
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I’m the same Alicia, perhaps because sad endings are more dramatic and have more of an impact. Therein lies the challenge!
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a promising beginning. i admire her caution, though.
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This is beautifully written. Nice one
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Thank you Keith!
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Yes, let’s take this thing slowly.
One step And one kiss at a time.
Randy
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I actually loved the “photograph to scrapbook of memories” bit. Sweet story, Madison.
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Thank you Dale!
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Ah, romance without suspense or horror 🙂
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A refreshing change?
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Indeed!
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What a wonderful romantic beginning.
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The kisses on the neck gave me shivers. In a good way, for sure.
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Thank you Alicia
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I felt as if I was there. Beautiful.
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Thank you Jen! 🙂
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you! 😘
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So sweet!! A very romantic and vivid poem.. loved it..
Please do give a read to my work. I hope you will like my poems. 🤞😄
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/10/my-moonlight-fantasy-%f0%9f%8c%92/
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